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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 12:16 pm    Post subject: Manip Criticue? Reply with quote

Well I have made two manips or something like that and need Criticue, NOTE: I have checked terms for the sites the photos are from.

Well here they are.








Thats number 1








Thats number 2





Please Criticue.


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Chloe Taylor



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The first one is kind of odd in my opinion but cute meerkat! And I love the second one!
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Chloe Taylor



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your pretty good! Would you like to help me? I'm looking for people who will do meerkat manips for me. Just look at my post that says, Got talent? Click Here! (thats the title)
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure I'll go look at the thread and the first had the text kinda got blocked because of the black backround... Thanks!
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wolfgirl159357



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OMG that is sooo cute
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Which one?
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Chloe Taylor



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

k! But seriously, good job!
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks!
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wolfgirl159357



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

both
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Fire Opal



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The first one is kind of odd looking. 0.0 But the second one is really nicely done! Nice job. Very Happy
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Cowgirls Rule



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 3:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

On the first one, try to not cut it so it's too skinny. Also, try using the softening tool to blend it into the background. Same with the first, except that try maybe outlining your picture of the cat with like red and then cut on the lines. Maybe that will help. But overall, pretty good.
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Bezzella



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 3:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

One tip I have is to make sure spelling is correct. It looks very unprofessional to misspell simple words like 'friends'.

On the first one, just undo the text, don't make a huge blurry blob where you attempted to erase text. The cutting is alright, perhaps spend a little more time on that instead of rushing through

The second one has a very huge copyright. Maybe try making it say, font size 12, and in the bottom corner. I like the cutting much better on this one. However, perhaps you should consider a background instead of a solid color. That color is almost the opposite of the orange cat so it hurts my eyes. I love soft colored textures or backgrounds that look like they fit your picture, with similar lighting and such.

Good job and keep working at it!
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 3:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the tips! I'll try them! I'm gonna post 1 more to see if anyone likes it.
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Cowgirls Rule



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 3:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay. I'm looking foward to that.
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sandtiger



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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 4:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

UPDATED: The last and most recent has been put up, please look!
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